We are now in the vacation, so we decided to go to the English camp. And I choose the Ranch West Camp instead of Camp Big Apple, because there are better things in Ranch West camp than Camp Big Apple.
I will talk about the first comparasion. The Camp big apple is an Intensive. They prepare for the math and English tests. They make us study for the hard tests, such as SAT. We will have to memorize the vocabulary, and have many homeworks. And, this can lead to the student's stresses. Because of this, the student's score will decrease oppositely what the camp wants to do. However, the Ranch West camp gives a free to children. They give the dicision to studying subject to students. The children can choose one subject that they have interest in, so they will not get sress. They will be more satisfied with the study. So, although the camp is not intensive for test, the students will have confidence of subjects they like.
Also,there are boring activities such as going to the museum, and touring the city. We love to move and run in the weekends, not walking around the cities. The Ranch West Camp think about us more. The activities are fun. We move and do sports, not walking around the cities. The children do hiking and canoeing. We can experience new things, such as horseback riding. This make us more experienced people. These sports make us smile and get rid of stresses.
The teachers are different, too. The Korean professors in Master degree teach children. They are not the native speakers. They will speack like the Koreans. But, in Ranch West Camp,the classes are taught by Canadian that recently graduated the University. So, the teachers are very professional. Their pronouncation and accent are different fro, the Koreans. So, the we can learn more correct English than students who went to Camp Big Apple.
Another difference is that Camp Big Apple makes children live in domitories with children from all around the world. Because of this, they can have language problem. For example, Japanese and Indian became the roommate. And, Japanese friend speak Japanese and Indian speak their language. So, they will not be able to communicate each other unless they use the body language. And, this will be hard. But, the Ranch West Camp use the home-stay, so the children can talk with the home owner. Also, they can experience a real life in the other country.
In conclusion, I think Ranch West Camp is better than Camp Big Apple for these reasons.
Good, but I think you can do much better! There are a lot of simple mistakes, grammar and spelling. Be careful which type of verb you use. Sometimes you are using "-ing" verbs when you should not. Read through the passage carefully before you post.
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